I'm currently working with a book coach to revise my WIP and you've helped me decipher some of the comments I've been receiving (much excite!).
It was two...
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I'm currently working with a book coach to revise my WIP and you've helped me decipher some of the comments I've been receiving (much excite!).
It was twofold. The first was the example of Jane looking away from Vincent. When I see the comment, "but what is she looking *at*?" I now know what to do! Also, I see a lot of "this is ambiguous" kinds of comments. Now I have some tools to apply some specificity to my dialogue and scenes.
I always learn one or two tasty tidbits from your courses.
Thank you!
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